This was our first feedback sheet from James and in my opinion I feel that the feedback that was obtained from him could've been in much more detail in order for it to be of use or help our group. However it shows that our presentation towards the class was explained clearly and was proven effective to sell our idea of our interview. The good thing was that James did pick up on the main point of our idea which was based on the music industry, however our group feel that it could have been good to see him make a point about the Van Susans or who we were interviewing. However we feel that it is good he has understood the intended idea.
Moving onto the next section of feedback we felt that it could have been potentially helpful however it seems that we don't have much relation regarding our questions towards RavensWood, it would have been nice to have the 'personal touch for the interview' however this seems rather irrelevant to our subject matter in the interview
Next, our group was glad to see that James had pointed out our best question being 'what musical influence did you have' we feel that this question is going to gain the most in detail response as this is going to be him telling us why he likes to play music and what keeps him doing it.
For the last piece of feedback we gained, our group felt that our worst question was most definitely not 'when did the band start' our reason for thinking this is that it is a very good question to get the ball rolling in terms of starting questions relating to his split with the Van Susans etc.
This was also from people in our class, Olivia and Savanah gave us some well detailed feedback that our group feel we can develop on and generate some ideas.
Our group were glad to see that they both fully understood the main purpose of our interview and gives us one thing not worry about it terms of making sure the audience understand what the purpose is.
Next we thought that their feedback for this question was good as they looked deeper into what the interview style and subject is about, they said that our idea is unique because it is very similar to being a personal account of a musician and possibly will the answers given about the band be negative or positive. By them both saying that this seems like it will be a personal account our group may take advantage of this in order to make our idea much more unique than others.
For these next questions which was what our best and worst questions, we were glad to see that they liked the two questions about touring the UK and the pay question, our reason being for this is because we feel that the touring question could gain an in detail response of what its like in terms of being tiring, is it enjoyable etc. Also our group feel that the other best question could gain a rather humorous response both for the viewers and Tim. He could possibly make a joke about the pay being terrible but not being bothered by etc.
For this piece of feedback our group felt that this question could be seen as negative and positive at the same time, we feel that people who are interested in Tim's style of music may feel it be nessesary or nice to know if Tim was joining another band and some may think it is rather controversial due to our subject during the interview will touch on why he left the Van Susans, possibly he doesn't want to talk abut it? This feedback shall make us think in detail what the negatives and positives will be gained from this question. ON the last piece of feedback that this group gave us we felt it was a very good idea to present to the audience some archive footage before or after the interview of Tim playing, we feel that this could showcase his skill to the audience and give a good indication of what the subject matter is.